Observation (by nose)

Yesterday our car smelled like pizza.

Today a friend asked us to take two of her three sick cats to the Humane Society. Tonight the car smells like cat urine.

Or:

Tonight our car smells like cat urine. A friend asked us to take two of her three sick cats to the Humane Society.

Yesterday the car smelled like pizza.

Which version do you prefer?

Actually, now that I think about it, I would have preferred:

Yesterday our car smelled like cat urine. A friend asked us to take two of her three sick cats to the Humane Society.

Today the car smells like pizza.

But that isn’t an option.

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