“The only problem
with Haiku is you just
get started and then”
The really best words
are the ones that you take out —
if their flavor lasts. . .
The trouble with writing a novel is that you have to go on and on and on after you’ve said everything you ever wanted to say, etc.,etc. . . .
Isn’t a haiku supposed to be 17 syllables long? If so, the posted one is too short.
I’ve spoiled this haiku. How did seventeen syllables become eighteen . . . huh?
On Mon, Mar 31, 2014 at 2:34 PM, hiddeninjesus
“Haiku” is three syllables.
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